Filed Under (poetry) by LifeStormr

Been noticing a lot
of fun going on
in the cloud
up above me.

Just last week I got
hit by another falling
bottle of fine wine
and woke up the next day
covered in party favors!

Boy, they sure seem to
never slow down.
I had an invite once,
to come up and join them,
but I second guessed it,
stayed home
and watched celebrity poker.

Maybe I should have taken that
chance though.
I’m too passive to get in the flow though
and just get up and go!
I get caught up doing what I always do.
Never setting foot outside just doin’
the things I always do.

They’re always laughing and smiling,
never having worries,
that hold you back,
keep you down,
lay you flat.

The inviter told me that
it’s like hearing your
favorite joke
for the first time,
over and
over
and over again.

Or maybe it’s like sleeping
out on a camping trip,
waking up
morning light,
warm,
hitting your face,
opening your eyes to the
deepest,
cleanest,
mountain breath
your lungs have ever tasted,
and you smile and realize
that this is a moment
you’ll want to live
1,000 more times!

Maybe I should take him up
on that invitation.
It’s just one step
I haven’t taken,
one chance I didn’t make,
a few more steps down
the road less traveled,
and a lifetime of difference
livin’ on cloud # 8…

Comments

Quackster on 10 May, 2008 at 4:51 pm #

Your poem had a nice flow. Easy to read and went from line to line just fine.


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